tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3560069307237139151.post958559145203832908..comments2023-10-26T06:39:37.076-07:00Comments on Ariel Emerald: May Blog Chain - How to show relationship dynamics?FantasticFictionhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07585904161476879106noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3560069307237139151.post-6075325385603371482011-07-18T10:49:30.734-07:002011-07-18T10:49:30.734-07:00Relationship create a one type of circle, In Which...Relationship create a one type of circle, In Which relationship has growing with dynamical ways. As well it's feel with heart, eyes, moments of life felling for it, much have explaining for it's improvement.<br /><br /><br /><br /><a href="http://www.dealsbell.com/" rel="nofollow">coupon code</a>Adron Ashtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11946948208092349851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3560069307237139151.post-58392412399592937272011-06-06T19:18:33.148-07:002011-06-06T19:18:33.148-07:00Thank you guys all SO much! Sorry I didn't get...Thank you guys all SO much! Sorry I didn't get to comment much yet! I'm glad you all enjoyed it!!! CHEERS!<br /><br />XFantasticFictionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07585904161476879106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3560069307237139151.post-20568082318252645902011-06-05T13:47:25.888-07:002011-06-05T13:47:25.888-07:00O.o Dusty is a little, err...creepy. Just don'...O.o Dusty is a little, err...creepy. Just don't tell him I said so! I think he's delusional at best. I love it! :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3560069307237139151.post-33019024909769995022011-06-05T12:09:37.221-07:002011-06-05T12:09:37.221-07:00Romance turns to stalking. This won't end well...Romance turns to stalking. This won't end well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3560069307237139151.post-10464321527584786152011-06-04T11:06:52.693-07:002011-06-04T11:06:52.693-07:00Sensuous, creepy - really a nice bit here. Poor de...Sensuous, creepy - really a nice bit here. Poor delusional Dusty. "She doesn’t just like me, she loves me, and I love her."<br /><br />Strong writing - good luck and great success with your submissions!Juniperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13487617321630533834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3560069307237139151.post-36213889312374866912011-06-01T10:44:44.035-07:002011-06-01T10:44:44.035-07:00I think I can see why this has been getting a lot ...I think I can see why this has been getting a lot of requests. Strong character, excellent description and a creepy vibe that doesn't inspire revulsion so much as pity.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3560069307237139151.post-53866959301827533212011-05-29T09:34:33.968-07:002011-05-29T09:34:33.968-07:00Tender and sad and beautiful. Poor Dusty. He IS a ...Tender and sad and beautiful. Poor Dusty. He IS a stalker. Loved his poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3560069307237139151.post-75564338972289437572011-05-28T08:03:27.351-07:002011-05-28T08:03:27.351-07:00Both creepy and heartbreaking at the same time. I...Both creepy and heartbreaking at the same time. I'm glad she threw that rock though. LOL The part about the water on her skin looking like spider silk in the moonlight was just lovely.<br /><br />Good luck with your submissions.Claire Gillianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08389410834599445845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3560069307237139151.post-5266458727614958622011-05-26T14:57:32.118-07:002011-05-26T14:57:32.118-07:00I got kind of a creepy vibe from Dusty too, almost...I got kind of a creepy vibe from Dusty too, almost stalker-ish. I wonder how Lexi & her boyfriend will handle this? Will Dusty turn out to be not-so-bad after all? Or is he as creepy as he seems here?<br /><br />Nice job & good luck with your submissions!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3560069307237139151.post-66598797157864931602011-05-25T07:44:41.316-07:002011-05-25T07:44:41.316-07:00Great snippet and good luck with those requests!Great snippet and good luck with those requests!Aimee Lainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15201246474625590886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3560069307237139151.post-43791390023453355732011-05-25T04:52:16.378-07:002011-05-25T04:52:16.378-07:00Whoa! Dusty is creepy, even by my standards. Some ...Whoa! Dusty is creepy, even by my standards. Some lovely description and great one-sided love. I'd say unrequitted, but I have an idea she knows how Dusty feels and isn't similarily inclined.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com